Hello Room 209 students,
Welcome to the Lab! I hope you're having a great day with Eric. Andrea and I are at a workshop at Confederation today and we're looking forward to hearing all about your day!
Please use your time in the Lab effectively today. Here are your tasks:
1. About the Authors
-finish writing your About the Author on the Google Drive. Make sure your work has your name in the title and that you have shared it with me
-Check out the rubric we collaboratively created below before you say to yourself, "I'm done." (You can also go to the rubric and suggest other addtions!)
Criteria
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Neon Green
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Green
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Yellow
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Red
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Details
-include interesting, relevant information
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-pizazz
-totally unique voice
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-a lot of details
-juicy
-tying things together: making connections
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-some listing is there
-connections are unclear
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-listing “I like...I like...”
-using the words stuff/things
-squeezing the juiciness out of your writing
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Structure
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-sentences are varied and interesting lengths
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Conventions
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-spelling is correct
-proper nouns are capitalized
-end punctuation is used
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Written in third person
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-it really sounds like someone else wrote it!
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-name is used often, or “she/he”, “his/her”
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-using your name and sometimes using “I”
-repeating name over and over and over
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-”My name is...”
-”I”
-excessive details used
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Layout
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-computer typed
-looks professional
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Image
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-photo or drawing includes: message, symbol, space, colour/hue
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-Share your About the Author with a classmate and have him or her share his or hers with you
-Go through and make comments on your partner's work
-Return to your own work and make any corrections or edits needed
2. Human Poster Research - you may continue to answer the questions you need to discover for your Human Poster. Make sure you have the list of requirements in your Social Studies duo-tang
Have a great, productive time in the lab today!
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